Tuesday, November 08, 2005

I spent an hour earlier redefining

CH, the short story. Each section will have about 700 words in it and I've got some good stuff, especially to try and make the villain more evil. I think I've got some good stuff here. Still trying to work out "Has a problem." I've taken lots of notes and wrote them down by hand and this looks good but the way it is turning out doesn't read like a science fiction story but more like a mystery. I need to foreshadow some more elements into the "In a Place" to have the MC appear to be more of a villain then before. Now it's time to go over these notes and make some sense of them.

PS if anyone is reading this, I'd sure appreciate some feedback. Thanks

e. jim

// posted by E.Jim Shannon @ 10:15 PM
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