I began doing the type-ins from CH "B" and I've got a much more improved story. I hope. I'm going to read it once more and I think I need to add a bit more in there to foreshadow some more elements in the story.. Other then the grammar the story is just about done. My printer smudged a page and I had to reprint and I got the second print okay. Smudging tells me the cartrige could be out of toner. I need to call the printer ink refill place in Londondarry mall to see if they can refill laserjet toner. If they can then that could save me a lot of money.
Anyway that's all for now.